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Sukai .:Bashful:.

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An update of

Character belongs to *NekoYasu
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Oh,this is my first time writing a critque o~o But i'll try


Okay i'll star off with the good things

The hands and feet are well don,and the fur detail makes it better uvu The wings have good anatomy as well. The shading looks very nice, The light spots could be worked on more,but it's fine either way. the eyes are pretty in terms of shading,but in my opinion they look a little to...oval-like. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/> Ah,for the overall anatomy,to me she doesn't look like much of a girl......or maybe that's just me. What i usually do is for the torso i make it curve in the middle, it makes it look more feminine. The mouth shape seems little off to me,but not much uwu hm.....i can't think of anything else that needs improvement. Great work overall,i hope to see you get better and better over time <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww"/>